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Word processing makes the dreaded written report a little less dreaded
 
Fifth graders in Missouri learn that writing more drafts is less work when the first effort is saved electronically.
 
By Leslye McCarty
 
Last spring, I assigned my fifth grade class a written report in conjunction with our social studies theme, The Hacker Trail--Westward Expansion. As usual, with the mention of a written report, students groaned, noses turned, and eyes rolled. I could also sense the tension some of my students identified as having learning disabilities were experiencing. I plowed on through my explanation and the expectations with as much excitement as I could, already knowing in the back of my mind that this assignment would not be as painful and grueling as they were making it out to be.
 
After briefly describing the project, each student chose a topic that was related to American life around the year 1850. The students then spent time researching their topics, gathering information from computer CDs like Worldbook Encyclopedia and Microsoft Encarta. Once we dug into the project, the students began realizing it would not be as horrible as they first thought. Since they were able to choose their topics, there was more interest and even some enthusiasm shown as new and unusual facts were revealed.
 
     The students then prepared their hand-written rough drafts. This was quite a chore for some. Children in my room experienced a range of ability levels. While most performed adequately, some had physical difficulty with writing while others were unable to organize thoughts into sentences and paragraphs that make sense. As soon as the majority of the students finished writing their rough drafts, we went to our school's computer lab, where I had reserved several periods throughout the week so the students could type their rough drafts. The resource teacher, Mrs. Smith, and I helped the students type their rough drafts and save them on their disks.
 
Use of the computer lab was not totally new to my students. They had been exposed to Microsoft Works, the word processing program we use at our school, in fourth grade. My students were part of the first class to start taking keyboarding classes and technology classes at Russell Elementary, so they were familiar with working in the lab, plus we had visited it off and on throughout the year as the need arose.
 
In just a short time, the students were printing off their final copies with a look of surprise and excitement in their eyes.
 
As the students started completing the typing of their rough drafts and printing them, many brought the typed product to me and happily exclaimed, "Here's my final paper!"
 
     My first reaction was to just stare at them with disbelief, thinking to myself, "They are serious about thinking they are really done with their reports."
 
     Mrs. Smith and I were tickled at their innocence in assuming that just because their rough draft was typed, it was automatically a finished, final product. Most of the students had a fairly hard time understanding that the first typed version was still simply a rough draft. It took us some time to explain, and convince, the students that the first typing was still only a rough draft, but the rest of the work on this project would not take long at all since that typed draft was saved on their disks.
 
For homework, the students were assigned to take their first typing home along with an editing checklist. They were supposed to go through their paper with a parent or guardian and edit. When students returned the following day with their checklists and revisions, we went to the computer lab to type in corrections. In just a short time, the students were printing off their final copies with a look of surprise and excitement in their eyes. Wow! Their final products were produced in less than a half hour! All of my students were thrilled; producing a final draft in much less time than the hours they would have spent rewriting and possibly even rewriting again to produce a final project was a welcome accomplishment.
 
     This was a new and rather enlightening experience for the majority of my students. Each student witnessed how the use of technology has made life a little easier. Mrs. Smith and I especially noticed an exciting change of attitude toward the writing process in our students with learning disabilities. The handful of students Mrs. Smith worked with blossomed in this project. The one student who still stands out in my mind as I remember this assignment is Mike. This whole process of writing and then typing and saving on the computer turned out to be an incredible revelation to Mike. He was identified as having a disability in reading and written expression, so an assignment of this nature was often perplexing and laborious for him. Mike was also a bit unorganized, tending to lose papers and notes that he had spent a great deal of time on. Each student was supplied with a Hacker Trail folder provided by the school, and this folder combined with a disk helped Mike keep his notes and drafts together and fairly organized.
 
The use of technology in tasks like a report excites elementary students, especially students who have a difficult time with the entire writing process.
 
Mike's topic was the California Gold Rush. His interest in the report went up and down throughout the steps of the assignment. Taking notes and writing a rough draft were a struggle he completed only because he had to. Typing the draft was also difficult because he was a pretty slow typist, and he had trouble typing exactly what he had written. He managed to produce a typed rough draft, wanting to immediately rid himself of it and turn it in as his final draft like the rest of the class. But, like the others, he stuck with the project and saw how valuable this learning experience was for him. Not only did Mike's written report give him a boost in his writing skills, he was one of my first students to stand up and read his report out loud to the class--a task he previously never would have done, especially voluntarily!
 
     Mike's buddy, John, who also was identified as having a disability in reading and written expression, was also surprised and delighted to find out how to make written projects easier, less painful, and less time-consuming. The use of technology in tasks like a report excites elementary students, especially students who have a difficult time with the entire writing process. This project of taking notes, writing a rough draft, typing the rough draft on the computer, saving the report, and going back into the saved file to revise was definitely a welcomed skill that these students will use in their future educational and professional careers. It was a basic skill many adults, including myself, take for granted. Little did many of my students realize how easy technology has made their lives, especially their school lives.
 
Like Mike, many students in today's educational system often view the written report assignment as a dreaded, painful experience for everyone involved: students, teachers, and parents. Many children with learning disabilities find writing complicated and frustrating, from generating ideas, spelling correctly, and using correct punctuation to the actual motor skill of holding a pencil and moving the hand. The thought of writing and rewriting as they work toward a final product is not a project these students eagerly anticipate. But seeing how Mike's dread of writing noticeably decreased because the complex act of writing and rewriting and even writing again had been made so much easier with the use of technology and word processing made me realize that the trips to the computer lab were not a luxury. Word processing undeniably made learning easier for Mike and other students, and anything that does this is a necessity.
 
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